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Re: Victoria's Poetry Stop
« Reply #1125 on: May 18, 2018, 05:52:12 am »
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DEPLETING SOUL

Oh how I watched, you lying there.
When your glowing light, disappeared.
No longer, was your loving soul aware.
You were called away, without a care.
Many years will fare, to come & go.
As the numbness, ov your soul.
But our luv for you, will always grow.
As we watched, your depleting soul.
God has blessed your soul.

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Re: Victoria's Poetry Stop
« Reply #1126 on: May 18, 2018, 06:21:34 am »
I think your new poem is very good though it's very sad & I can feel for both you & the emotions expressed.

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Re: Victoria's Poetry Stop
« Reply #1127 on: June 12, 2018, 05:15:01 am »
Thank you lady Ann, I lost another ov my family, she was still to young to go. 57 and the health nut, this rare disease put her in a nasty rut. Only 100 known cases, with 41 now documented. Sad to say, medical history she became. She was number 41, with none of them no longer  existing. Luv ya lady.

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« Reply #1128 on: June 12, 2018, 10:35:53 am »
Thank you lady Ann, I lost another ov my family, she was still to young to go. 57 and the health nut, this rare disease put her in a nasty rut. Only 100 known cases, with 41 now documented. Sad to say, medical history she became. She was number 41, with none of them no longer  existing. Luv ya lady.
You're welcome, Lady Victoria. I'm very sorry to hear that but know how you feel. I've felt it too. You get to the stage where you don't know what to say anymore. You just need to cry & although you're good with words you no longer know what to say. Love you too & I'm thinking about you. If you ever need to chat, you know where I am.

 

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